谁能帮忙看看有没有这种英文简历描述有没有问题

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1、 Make full use of the channels to search qualified sales staff.
2、The management of the sales staff ,Including entry and leaving process, compensation, HR data update.
3、Evaluate sales staff performance and reward.
4、Develope and follow up training plan.
5、Completed role playing Training as killing、life on desert island etc.

1、 training new employees about store operation knowledge.
2, supervision and inspection of the orders, inventory, sales.